March 5, 2011

the hunter

it lurks in the shadows
but as soon as the prey is sighted
it springs into action
chasing after it
with the speed of a thousand horses
the prey tries to escape
but to no avail
there can be no other outcome
it leaps into the air
and lands with a deadly bite
sinking its teeth in
deeper and deeper
and so the feasting begins
the flesh is consumed
satisfied now
it gets up slowly and leaves
a smile on its face
all covered in blood

12 comments:

Prudence said...

nice..

but while you glorify the hunter I feel sorry for the prey!! ARe you a hunter or a prey?

Jundi said...

no need to feel sorry for the prey ... i wasnt talking literally .. actually the whole thing was a metaphor for a man spotting a woman and pursuing her until success .. if you know what i mean :D

Jundi said...

its just a very animalistic take on the relationship game

Prudence said...

oh please...I knowwwww that's why I asked.

You see hunters need not only be men...open your eyes :p

Jundi said...

lol youre funny :D

Prudence said...

ma azna5ak sho 2asdak??

Jundi said...

suddenly i feel like ray liotta in that scene from goodfellas .. shu asdi .. ur comment made me laugh hence my response .. 0_o

Prudence said...

I've never seen goodfellas so I don't realy know how you feel

I wonder why it made you laugh...cuz eventho I was smiling when I wrote it I wasn't aiming at making you laugh...not that I mind you laughing on the contrary but you know I'd like some other response with that laugh...However it seems you don't want to admit that you're a prey and that is why you're giving me the run around

I'm sure you now regret ever writing that piece let alone sharing it :p

Jundi said...

ive been a prey and ive been a hunter .. doesnt make me one or the other :P

you havent seen goodfellas??? watch it NOW .. classic mafia movie :D
if you need a reason just watch it only so you can get the reference ..

Prudence said...

lol I am curious...Ok i'll try to get it and watch it tho I'm not into mafia movies...can you believe it I'm not into violence any more...it makes me sick :S

Jundi said...

i guarantee u will like it .. but if ur too lazy to watch it and just want to see the scene i am referencing then click here

Prudence said...

lol and you SHOULD feel that way..2al you're funny :p

Btw I did write "how exactly am I funny" but then deleted it :O