February 10, 2011

suck on this shakespeare

here is another poem i wrote ... i call it inside the sunshine ...

the perfect moment
black as midnight
flickering neon lights
fluttering curtains
it's raining outside
a banging noise
or is it a rattling noise
perhaps both
two becoming one
fulfilling the dream

7 comments:

Prudence said...

Well at least shakespeare is a little ambiguous :p

Not bad at all ;)

Jundi said...

I'M ambiguous!

Prudence said...

lol you are are you??

I don't like ambiguous people...I constantly try to see thru them...to figure them out and once I do I loose interest in them...it always turns out that their ambiguity was their only charm!!

Jundi said...

well maybe not ambiguous .. im more mysterious :D

Prudence said...

Mysterioussss yaaay

I met a mystersious guy once...he was my partner in organic chemistry lab. I quite liked him cuz he let me do all the real work and he only acted like my assisstant. He never questioned my judgement or my results...he was completely uninterested in the whole issue...he also entertained me with crazy words of wisdom.
Alas he shortly dropped out...turned out he was mentally ill :o

Totally like mysterious people...so exciting :p

Jundi said...

so i remind u of a mentally ill person thats good to know -_-

Prudence said...

lol yes but I also said that I lIKED mentally ill people, some of them, and that they're exiting... YOu gotta take that as a compliment :p